Friday, 7 November 2008

The human sea

The seas waves punch the rocks changing their shape.
It grabs the crabs like a dark cape.
The sea walks over the beach and swallows the sea-shells and sand.
It stretches its waves and pushes the boats with its wet hands.
The sea jumps so high with all its might to touch the sky.
The sea feels lonely so it talks to the fishes and says “Hi”

By Amanda

6 comments:

Miss Yassin said...

I am really impressed with your use of interesting vocabulary to create a great personification poem.

Anonymous said...

good work Amanda very good.

Akash said...

good poem and good vocabulary

Yasir said...

good but it could be longer

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Toni said...

i love your poem it very good !