Thursday, 27 November 2008

The magical world

One furious day, a boy called max came home from school. He was 10 years old. He was wearing black trousers with paint on and a torn jumper. He had no friends or any one to turn to.

The next day he was sat there moaning about his life. Then he saw a beautiful door he had never seen in his bedroom before. It was filled with diamonds also flowers. He could smell perfume. It was such a nice smell .The perfume smelt like strawberries. He could even hear someone singing. The singing was so bad that if anyone heard it they would faint.

When the boy looked inside the door he saw a fairy. She was in the sky. The fairy had a diamond chair and there in the sky everything looked so marvellous. There were so many beautiful doors all made out of crystals. The fairy had lovely clothes on. She was wearing an awesome dress and it was shiny and glamorous. On her hair she had a wonderful crown and underneath the sky she could see the world. She spoke, “I know your life is miserable and you don’t like it. That’s why I called you here. I’m giving you this diamond. If you need any help shake it and I will come”.

The boy Max could look at his future with that diamond. He was so happy. He didn’t look at his future instead he decided to look at his future later and he went shopping. He put his diamond in his pocket. A witch was there doing shopping too. She was called Corolla. She had a big black hat on and a big black dress with a cloak on.

She saw the boy with the diamond and she chased after him but he ran away. She chased after him because she knew that the diamond would give her more magical powers. Tired, the witch went to her evil palace and she had a white screen magical machine. She used it quite often. With that machine she could find out where the boy was. She looked in the machine and she saw the boys house. “Now who will save you?!” said the witch. She suddenly disappeared. She was at the boys house. When the boy saw her it was too late to run! “Where will you escape Now?!” said the witch and she took the boy to her evil palace. She took the diamond and she kept it in her pocket. The boy had to be her slave and he was badly treated.

One day, the witch woke to find the diamond gone. She didn’t know where the diamond was. The boy saw the diamond underneath a table and took it. He shook it and eventually the fairy appeared. The fairy was so angry at the witch that she took the magical machine and removed the witch’s powers too.

The fairy shook her wand at the boy and then he was absolutely fine. Just as he was about to say ‘thank you,’ the fairy disappeared. The boy was sitting in his room wondering how he could meet the fairy, and then he remembered he had been given the diamond.

The boy shook the diamond and the fairy came and said,” I was going to come to you because I want to give you something”. “What do you want to give me?” said the boy. “I want to give you magical powers so you can live in a magical world,” replied the fairy. She waved her wand and the boy felt the magic dust spread over him. “Thank you” said the boy. Then the fairy smiled and she disappeared. The boy bought a new house and he lived in a magical world forever.

By Rakhee

4 comments:

Miss Yassin said...

A brilliant story here. I enjoyed reading it. Well done :)

Anonymous said...

A fantastic story rakhee .i enjoed it . welldone.

Sonia said...

Nice story there i like it a LOT

Aayushi said...

COOL COOL AND COOL
i remember when you told me this story in the dining hall

But is was way better reading it

WELL DONE WELL DONE WELL DONE WELL DONE WELL DONE WELL DONE WELL DONE