Thursday, 27 November 2008

Tigzy's Adventure

Tigzys adventure

At Jakes house, Jessie and Jake had just woken up after the sleep over they had that night .Jake and Jessie were in the same class. They were the same age. The same everything! The only difference was that Jessie was a girl and Jake wasn’t. They were best friends. Jessie had outstanding hair. “It’s blond and beautiful,” her mum would say.
Jake was adventurous, just like his little cat Tigzy. Tigzy, an odd cat, liked to go on adventures. He had gigantic green eyes as well as marvellous black fur.
He also had enormous fury ears. Jake loved his cat.

The children started to play with Tigzy in the garden. They had to keep an eye on Tigzy as he liked to run away.
Jake told Jessie to keep an eye on Tigzy, “Sure I will!” she shouted up the stairs.

In the living room, the TV was on it highest volume. “MY FAVIROUTE SHOW!” she shouted. ‘I have to see this,’ she thought to herself ‘but what about Tigzy?’. “What will I do”? She whispered.

While Jessie was thinking about what to do the TV was getting louder and louder in her mind. Jessie thought a quick peep wouldn’t hurt. But if she thought that, she didn't know Tigzy. As soon as Jessie turned, he ran thunderously as fast as he could, on his little feet through a hole in the hedge.

Then 2 minutes later she turned. He was gone and Jake was coming down stairs. ’ What will I do?’ she thought to herself. ‘What will I tell Jake?’ she thought nervously. I have to be brave.

While Jake was coming down the stairs Jessie was sitting there silently. Jake was worried. "What’s wrong?” he asked sensitively. "Well I don’t know how to tell you this but Tigzy went on an adventure” she quietly said, waiting for him to shout at her. Instead he had a smile on his face.”This will be fun" he giggled.” WHAT YOUR NOT ANGRY!?” she shouted. "No" he chuckled,” lets go he can’t be far ".

By now Jessie and Jake were all the way in the high street. "There he is” said Jake.
They ran as fast as they could through the fruit stall and sweet shop.” Got him” shouted Jessie.” HURRY JAKE, HURRY JAKE WITH THE CAGE” Jessie shouted impatiently.

They brought him home and locked every window and door. Then they let Tigzy out of the cage.” Here you go Tigzy home sweet home,”Jake said. “Let’s go up stairs" he said turning to Jessie. "Ok” she replied.

While they were upstairs Tigzy was trying to find a way into the garden. He couldn’t. Everything was locked. Doors. Cupboards. Windows. Everything. But Tigzy was not going to give up .He never gave up and he’s wasn’t about to start now. He looked up, down, left and right for a way out. He had a plan.

He saw a window not closed properly. He was going to wreck the house while they were upstairs and when Jake’s parents get home he would climb out the window. Then Jake and Jessie would get the blame. ‘Revenge,’ he thought.

So Tigzy destroyed everything. It looked like a black hole came and ate everything and spat it out again. It looked like a hurricane or flood had hit the house.The taps were running. It was just horrible.

Next, the door bell rang .He ran on his little legs to the window but he couldn't reach it so he ran in the wardrobe. The parents entered the house WHAT IS THIS "shouted jakes parents. Was Tigzy caught?

By Louisa

10 comments:

Miss Yassin said...

Looks like you made your cat Tigzy famous. I loved reading this story Louisa. I wonder what happened to the cat at the end :)

Toni said...

louisa your story is great! ;)

Anonymous said...

WOW!louisa fantastic its a wvery good story.

Yasir said...

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yaqub said...

nice one louise

Akash said...

this is a greatttttttttttttttttt story

Sonia said...

WOW! WHAT A STORY I LIKE IT GOOD WORK KEEP IT UP.

Claudia said...

WoW! I loved that story!!! if that was in the shops i would defently buy it!!! Jake and Jessie kinda reminded me of you and Kyle! LOL! :P YOU EVEN USED SOME SIMALIES, about the messy room looked like a black hole had swolone the room and spat it out!!!! AMAZIN!!! :D

Aayushi said...
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Aayushi said...

I like your story.Tigzy sounds like trouble to me.WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!!!!!1