Friday, 7 November 2008

The coat is alive


The headless coat stretches its sleeves while its buttons yawn.
Put on the coat, it will keep you warm with its fiery touch.
The hood is a butterfly net grabbing you on the head, preventing your hair from getting wet.
Its collars flap like eagles wings.
The coat’s buckles are a galloping horse, walking over the coat, with its clingy, clangy feet.

The coat is alive!!!

By Amanda

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

another very good one amanda

Sonia said...

Amanda has put a lot of effort in this poem. Good work Amanda Keep it up!
Sonia

Akash said...

good poem again

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Yasir said...

good and a good personifacation poem